Sunday, April 10, 2005

Hang the Noose

Melt with me. Dim the light.
For the sake of pride,
Let us retreat to a duller mind.
And now the eye of family
Is an evanescing memory.
So hang the noose back in the attic.

3 Comments:

At 12:17 PM, Blogger Dingus said...

I get some really interesting imagery out of this: like all the pictures in my head are seen in the daylight that comes into a house/attic through loose boards; no tungsten. Cool. :)

 
At 5:14 PM, Blogger Matthew said...

I hate how arwen almost ruined this by analyzing it.
Imagery she sez, like this is english class.
The flow of this piece is my favorite part of it.

 
At 11:32 PM, Blogger Dingus said...

I think by images all the time, school or no. Analyzing? Matt. Come on.

 

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